More work on what I suspect will be an extremely long scene. It was a lot of fun tonight– so much fun I’m already worried the scene will have to be cut or abridged. The tone is very different from most of the rest of the work, almost… cute. But it’s a strange scene, so maybe appropriate.
I always worry that my conflicts are too short. I’ll write lead-up and cool-down, of course, but the actual ‘exchange of blows’ (even if it’s not an actual physical fight) seems to only ever take up an estimated page or two.
I’ve scheduled my trip to CA, but I’ll only be there for Monday afternoon, Monday night and Tuesday-day. Flight out leaves around eight, I think, on Tuesday.